Lonely among all company
A crowd bustles around me
I sit with my hot coffee
Trying to pen down thoughts.
A sip of caffeine sends my
Tongue into a burning numbness.
My pen hovering over the paper
The train of thoughts rushing.
So many ideas arrive
But all devoid of form.
I scratch my head
Another sip, I tap my fingers
Fidget with my pen, roll it around
Scribbling a scetch, scratching it out.
My coffee is turning cold, emptied in a swig
I know what to write yet words fail me.
I thought of poetry about war, peace and
The seas, pirates and their boat
Nothing still came to my mind
So this is all that I wrote.
12 comments:
u seem to be a big coffee addict,
same with me cant live without caffine [:P] .. lols..
nice post!
sharad
ah lovely poem!!
I Live on coffee too! :D
peace & love
JeeVY
You know what?? The primary reason as to why I dig this particular poem is because I can REALLY relate to it...I did exactly this in Barista one day...
General musings on paper....very, very good.
wow welllwversed thoughts good talent
poetry!!! you write poetry!!!! aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!
can relate to it!!
i have writer's block every second day.
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my worst fear! writer's block sucks...n i think i'm getting it a bit...
hey...am sure I had commented on this...
I remember saying..its amazing how those who have writers block can make a post on it, thereby negating the actual meaning of writer's block...
Many people can relate to this poem cuz its about writers block. i had it too so I wrote about the experience of having writers block. You actually try to kick urself to come up with ideas...
yea I know... but I am not relating here...am just giving a general opinion...when writers can't write about anything..they write on writer's block..
anyway...on that poll you have left on blogger community...have left a few ideas.
Writers block!!! its weird how poets can write on writers block!!! good work!!
i cn realte to it in da sense one day i tried hard to be lyk a poet, sittin in ccd n tryin hard zat sum kind of thoughts struck my mind n i become j.k.rowling...but nopes noting comes to mind...seems u had 1 go at zat too!!....nice honey
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